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Undefeated

Noted Nest

Updated: Jul 6, 2024

By Benjamin Lobo



I fell down many times and got hurt, 

But I stood up and wiped off the dirt. 

Many times i was broken and damaged, 

Many times because of my anger I've caused a

rampage. I've faced many difficult situations, 

from the crown of my head till the soul of my toe.

But i still have courage and dedication, 

And I still know that I can go. 

Sometimes I feel , I'll lose my breath 

Sometimes I feel, my head will break 

I can't give up nothings left 

And I realise if I try hard it'll be a piece of cake.

I'll only stop now when I win, 

I may or may not sin. 

I'm ready to taste defeat, 

but if i do I'll just rise back on my feet.


By Benjamin Lobo

 
 
 

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9 Comments


Desmond Lobo
Desmond Lobo
Aug 09, 2024

Nice.

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simon
Jul 27, 2024

Nice Benjamen

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Vanessa D'souza
Vanessa D'souza
Jul 24, 2024

Liked the poetic rhythm.. Also very powerful msg on standing your ground undefeated. Keep it up all the best

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kccfksimon
Jul 24, 2024

Yes keep it up you will win

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fernandesterrina
Jul 24, 2024

Amazingly written

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