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Noted Nest

Thank You

Updated: Oct 3, 2024

By Mahati Shiralkar



“your ears are huge,

and your acne is on the loose,”

the comment reads.


tears are sprinting down my betrayed face,

against the acne that was insulted,

touching the ears that were humiliated.


but i realise:

one comment and i’m hurt,

two lines and i’m destroyed.

that’s not okay, surely not fine.


to give in is to lose.

and i’m not going to.


i wipe the tears off my face,

type a reply and brace,

“thank you,

but i’d never say anything like that to you.”


By Mahati Shiralkar



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Rupa Padia
Rupa Padia
19 июл. 2024 г.

Responded correctly

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SWETHA PATEL
SWETHA PATEL
13 июл. 2024 г.

Superb Poem

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Sei Babu
Sei Babu
13 июл. 2024 г.

Great poem

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Shital Patel
Shital Patel
13 июл. 2024 г.

Great words

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KayKay
13 июл. 2024 г.

World is not always a mirror!

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